Who knew you and I would be in this place.
I still remember the day we met.
You caught my eye and said hey, I said hello.
Soon enough we were best friends.
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Well done. I like the way the last line of a stanza connects with the next one and ties it together.
well thought out and still holds a natural flow, doesnt get any better, thought, words, style, flow, all perfect. great job.