Little Death Comments

A very moving poem by a good poet

I got your introduction form Faisal Alvi, he is my new friend and brother Your poems are very nice but especially poem Little Death is spectacular. I really enjoy it and wish you to write more impressively.

so touching, well done thanks for sharing

good piece...insightful and moving...well done, Kamran 10

Oh yeh! ! how can u be happy and content when u 'can’t see your lips moving, Still I hear your soft-velvety voice… When I can’t hold your hand, 'You ask me… To smile, To be happy, To stay blissful, To live content, To enjoy festivity, To dance tango, And To sleep with tranquility…' Yeh truly-how can you. Nice love poem +++10 regards anju

an excellent piece of work with lots of feeling, after reading this poem i came to know this your writing skill's very strong and powerful....beautiful very beautiful...thanks for sharing 10++++

Wow, it's a very passionate piece, for the first time i find so unconventional but so powerful interpretation of the 'dawn', absolutely responding to the title and whole the suggestion of this wonderful poem. I like it very much! BR, one

An excellent piece. Little death in the land of love. 10+

Yeahhh Kamran, like the sayin ' I don't love you anymore, but will keep you in my heart'.Little death.....though...resurrected by givin back what has been lost! Excellent writes my bro!

Your title is perfect for the content of your poem. Very well written. Kind regards, Sandra

Its an wow! of course 10++++