Sunday, February 25, 2018

Little Crystal Dewdrop Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little crystal dewdrop
Trembling daughter of the morning,
On the tip of a leaf of thyme
What are you doing on the hill?
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Reva Kern
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 March 2018

When the valley still sleeps What are you doing on the hill? Wow, a nice drop of dew on the soft heart of the reader too, so nicely placed. You are superb. Thanks for the sharing this lovely poem dear Reva. 10+++++

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Chinedu Dike 27 February 2018

A nice creation, well conceived and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Reva.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2018

A very elegant little poem! Loved the poetic expression! Liked the second stanza most! ......10

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