Tuesday, October 8, 2019

Little Coward Comments

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She had taken all his abuse.
And now it was time to fight back.
So on top of his head with a frying pan.
She gave him a whack.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2019

She said, I'm not finished hitting you yet. When I'm through with you. You will never abuse another woman. This you can bet.......outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem is well executed. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thanks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 October 2019

An amazing poem! Your style of penning is unique...I like it

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