Little Children Lost Comments

Round, round and around they go Backwards, forwards, to and fro Swinging high and swinging low Love this verse. It really depict the children character.

swinging in nature....................! !

There are eternal thoughts strung and enmeshed infinitely and inexplicably into the day and should from time to time cause us to pause and cautiously think. This is such a concept of love in kind essence. An affirmation not anchored to a temporal source but with an innate timelessness, inherently worthy of our retention. This is one of those beautifully considered, precisely crafted and deftly expanded pieces that will recall one to touch that gentle human essence and its connection to life. Thank you for your writing.

What a precious poem, and that last line- it's sublime..it echoes my own thoughts on the matter. Beautiful write here.

This is quite timeless. 10

Excellent! Poignantly promising.

they live forever in the heart of humanity, for they are it's beating!

Wonderful.