Little daughter came to me
With white dress and looked really fairy
“Papa, my wings seem so weak”
I watched her and in silence could not speak
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Wow Faith Redfield14 minutes ago This is really strong: 3 Comment +1 Great! !
Great! ! Dina Yakout16 minutes ago Thank you for sharing this great poem that resonates with kindness and humanity :) Comment +1 Father's love for his child
Ifeanyi Nnadi15 minutes ago Yes girl child pose little problem Comment +1 Needs more work
Hashan Mannan11 minutes ago Theme or story has no consistency. Poetic flow is very weak. Punctuation are required.
Salute to you Vijaya Sarathi Putcha33 minutes ago Wow. As usual. You have expressed very great.
How will you address impatient person? Sure with some honorable words if he is V.I.P
I loved it! Kenji Z7 minutes ago Now I dont have any children of my own, but I have nieces and nephews. Watching them grow, you step in and correct the wrongs but in the end some mistakes have to be made in order to for them to grow and learn as their own. I dont mean to offend any parents, its just my take on it. Loved how your words painted a beautiful yet grim picture. Such is life. Comment +1