Saturday, May 1, 2010

Little Butterfly Comments

Rating: 4.8

I saw you flutter by and you said to me
“Your hands are strong
But your touch is weak
I am moved by other things”
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Brandon Owens
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Vaughn Bekker 26 May 2010

rather a deep piece you have written here, well done, good poem

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Ena N. Mori 02 May 2010

This poem is a brilliant literary piece. I like the rhyming. Keep on writing! Thanks for your comment on one of my poems.

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