Thursday, March 3, 2016

Little Burden Little Relax Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little burden we have here
After birth and still death
We work and expect more far
But we forget to take rest.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Giavonna Ferrari 20 October 2020

After burden of work, we need to take rest. At night we should take proper rest. This poem is very beautiful.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 July 2019

Many moments for life, so few for for us to relax.. lovely thoughts to ponder.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 March 2016

Little relax refreshes us We think and think and decide Little burden goes away in day While light sparks to rest. A great thought, if we mange to minimize our needs, we shall need a little joy to relax and shall have a sound sleep.

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M Asim Nehal 03 March 2016

Superb! ! ! Welcome back....A nice poem to begin again, enjoyed it,10.

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Kelly Kurt 03 March 2016

Rest is essential, both for body and mind

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2016

So many moments in life! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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