Thursday, July 30, 2009

Little Brother Comments

Rating: 5.0

Though you came to our family a year ago
You are my favorite little brother,
that I know.
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M.J. Daniels
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*_sakura ~daisy_* 01 August 2009

hmmm tis' very heartwarming poem it held me to the last line^^ nicely done^^

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 July 2009

Till the last line, it is a suspense, to find that it is a cat. Well written.

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sky dreams 30 July 2009

this poem is filled with love and innocence.. i enjoyed reading it, it made me smile =)

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Ejaz Khan 30 July 2009

A nice little poem, enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

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