little broken angel,
i know it hurts
i understand the pain
i see the scars
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This poem is glorious, Your wording, and repitition, makes the poem all the more magnificent, Truly a lovely piece of art.
beautiful poem written so well an angel whose pain you can see so clearly and wanting to help that angel ~Bella
Some broken angels wait for their wings to heal, before flying away. Often, it does not, then they can never fly again. Unless, somebody picks them up from the ground, like a bird who's fallen out of the tree, and nurse them gently back to being strong... A sad poem, but I did see an inspirational message...
A poignant poem, and with such compassion to those little angel, expressed well poetically.
A very deep poem of intense loneliness, very well written. Bruises and scars all over, the reader can feel the pain Listening to an apparently compassionate, yet deceiving ghost. Just at the other side of the help-line are compassionate people who can beat up the ghost and with their wonderful glue of empathy can repair the wings of the angel inside, meant to live a life full of beauty on earth. Wow, Grl, you got me really in a special mood. Great poem.
Speechless... I think this is my favourite of your poems... Brilliant! !
wow that a rlly good poem it says a whle lot it makes you think