Oh very, very good! I like it Dominic.I like it a lot!
Completely got me and suckered me in.
And I never saw it coming. So cleverly written and your final line is to die for.
I thought it was going one way then does a U-turn.
10++ and well done, an excellent variation on an old theme with a most modern twist.
Thank you Dominic and I wish you well.
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Oh very, very good! I like it Dominic.I like it a lot! Completely got me and suckered me in. And I never saw it coming. So cleverly written and your final line is to die for. I thought it was going one way then does a U-turn. 10++ and well done, an excellent variation on an old theme with a most modern twist. Thank you Dominic and I wish you well.