Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Little Blue Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little blue butterfly,
Sitting on my finger,
Silently flapping your wings.
Then moving swiftly to my nose,
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Jameaka Shibles
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 19 June 2010

Simple and elegant I want to see more of these poems

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Emeka Chunye 20 April 2010

I'll refer to dis butterfly as love. Ur poems r simple not complicated, poems r meant to be simple and digestive like urs.

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Emeka Chunye 20 April 2010

I'll refer to dis butterfly as love. Ur poems r simple not complicated, poems r meant to be simple and digestive like urs.

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Emeka Chunye 20 April 2010

I'll refer to dis butterfly as love. Ur poems r simple not complicated, poems r meant to be simple and digestive like urs.

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Billy Booza 12 April 2010

The butterfly of love is a wonderful thing. May it forever fly in high in the sky.

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Greenwolfe 1962 09 April 2010

A delightful little poem with beauty created by a flower. Greenwolfe 1962

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* Stephen *king 08 April 2010

you asked me to work on your poem but your poem is good so keep it as it is....... butterfly that is blue from whence come no one has clue woo........woo.........woo........

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Ben Turner 08 April 2010

nice poem love it :)

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loved it just beautiful :) 10/1000

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A J 06 April 2010

one word and one word only: beautiful

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i like this poem :) 10/10

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C Note 30 March 2010

Beautiful in its symmetry.

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Daniel Mason 30 March 2010

you write as if your a pretty blue butterfly yourself dnt change that theres nothing better than a gentle woman

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very good poem keep up the good work.

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