Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Little Bird..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey little bird on the tree...
I m afraid you won't long be free...
The heartless are coming, full of rage...
To capture and put you in a cage...
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Ankit Mittal
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Hans Vr 05 August 2012

Very compassionate message in melodious verses. Compassion is one our greatest assets I pray for this bird to be free and for all birds in the world

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Alafe Ramat 14 July 2012

This is wonderfu, a beautifu poetry and very wel crafted..wel done

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Dave Walker 28 February 2012

A really great poem, really like it. A fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, War Of The Land.

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Hans Vr 28 February 2012

Good poem, good rhymes. Well written. I like the content also

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