Friday, April 6, 2012

Little Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

While she was walking along the street
There was a crowd beside the road
It looks like a flocks of sheep
She was so curious to know about it,
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Aswathi Asok
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Vipins Puthooran 14 April 2012

'Tis a good composition with a story of humanity.... Humanity dies nowadays but all must be gathering in front of Him on that day of Judgement where we will be counted for the deeds we have done here.... Thanks for sharing this simple /elegant poem... It made me to think for a while... Top marks! ! !

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