Touching a cheek so soft and tender
A feeling of boundless joy captures me
My little sister is staring at me
And my heart is filled with warmth
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This is so lovely! Your sister is so lucky to have such a sweet poem written about her.
Awww this is such a sweet poem. It holds a lot of emotion. A little bit of criticism however, You still held me and my attention but the last stanza definitely did throw off the poem a bit.
Really good, deep meaning. but maybe 2 straight out an definatley too long.
This is absolutely delightful! I only wish either of my sons felt the same way about their little sister. Sigh...... Great stuff.