Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Litter Louts Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is heavy
As I walk the beach
See the sun setting
Water under my feet
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Daniel Bernard Kelleher
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Roseann Shawiak 20 January 2016

Going to the ocean, lying on the beach, enjoying the beauty of God's good nature is a wonderful way to spend time thinking. Why do some people trash it like they do their own property, have they no shame or common decency? Your poem is spot on and said very tactfully, unlike those who throw trash everywhere they go. Give it a 10! Very good rhythm and imagery throughout your poem. I love it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 January 2016

Clearing the litter Tomorrow's a new beginning comes on the clean beach. Very wonderful poem is expressive definitely.10

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Daniel Bernard Kelleher

Daniel Bernard Kelleher

Cork, Ireland
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