Friday, May 2, 2008

Listening Comments

Rating: 3.5

Your heart cries out, you’re afraid to admit you love me.
You doubt we will last, you smile through anything, but
not through this. How can I show you im listening? I hear
you with my heart, I feel how you feel, im one in the same,
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david bailey
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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 19 August 2009

I may say you are a great lover.. your words are the doer of the action.. very well said!

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Carrol Hoffman 16 May 2008

wow amazing poem very well written

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 May 2008

My friend there is more of me in this poem than you will ever know, are you listening my baby out there, I love you so... Andy 10

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Anita Raine 02 May 2008

WOW.. beautiful and very straight forward.

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