Monday, January 23, 2023

Listen To Your Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our love drifted away like a ship from the shore,
My heart called you back but my mind let you go,
As we said our goodbyes there was no going back,
I was such a fool for it's courage I lacked,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Susan Williams 23 January 2023

such an honest outcry from a heart that learned the hard way---they say we learn from our mistakes--that's what they say---they are sometimes blind---it is so rare that life will do a rewind so we can do it right--love yiour poem--top marks

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Jayne Louise Davies 24 January 2023

Thank you Susan for your lovely comment x So appreciated : )

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Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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