Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Listen To The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.6

As the leaves swayed by the wind hands
My feeling strongly catch secret sense
There was something in the wind
Calling for the rain...to fall
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Unwritten Soul
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Mahtab Bangalee 13 March 2020

The last drop The rain stopped, There was a rainbow drawn Proudly high in the blue sky Expressing a nice feeling Defined by the rain and earth Of the true friendship...../// romantically described; beautifully penned, I enjoyed here on the ground of memory on the lap of heart the drop of rain will remind your letter which you gave in springtime by the course of time I opened in rainy season as if the rain drop made me wet with your togetherness.........o dear

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 July 2018

'when u meet a friend appreciate them, love them like me love to earth... we are far apart but we remember each other' ...a true word from rain This memory will remain..........this is what rain tells us through your pen. Though the earth and rain are far apart yet their love is true and deep. They remember each other. Nice imaginary. A beautiful metaphorical poem shared amazingly.10

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Hazel Durham 20 May 2017

A beautifully written poem with great imagery and inspired lines!

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Christopher Tye 26 August 2016

Wonderful poem and so beautifully written, good friends are the lifeblood of a good life lived.

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Muhammad Ali 24 August 2016

beautiful song of friendship. very nice poem.

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Valsa George 08 November 2015

'when u meet a friend appreciate them, love them......This is what the rain tells us through its sweet music! You have given a wonderful interpretation to the music of rain

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 September 2013

Beautiful poem Soul..I missed you rain songs, though the rainy season over. When you meet a friend, appreciate them, love them. Yes, a true word from rain, this memory will remain. Beautiful write..your each stanza written very well. Loved it.

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Phiwe Mbatha 15 September 2013

Beautifully written

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Kanav Justa 12 December 2012

Freinds are beutiful aspect of life... Wonderfully written

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Ruby Honeytip 04 December 2012

Nawwwwww......I actually feel like my newest special friends have been made right here on Poem Hunter. This is a truly beautiful write: -)

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Allemagne Roßmann 15 September 2012

Rain pirouetted very well in the potholes of life, pitter-pattered in the minds of readers-who does not want rain? Men always longs for monsoon and only women remain snowy cold hard-iced smoky winter...enjoyed..

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Gina Albiek 30 December 2011

It's so touching and a dramatic sensitive one, realy enjoyed reading it :)

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Kaitlin Schmidt 28 December 2011

I loved your imagery, pictures were just appearing in my head right and left. Very beautiful!

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Jacqui Broad 26 October 2011

Oh, this touched my soul. Shuddering from the pain of a breakup. Crying from loss. But, one shouldn't cry because it's over, one should smile because it happened...

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Stefanie Fontker 28 September 2011

So beautiful. The rain is beautiful, and so symbolic. I love the humanity you express in your poetry, it's so pure and beautiful.

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Jinal Oswal 25 August 2011

'The last drop The rain stopped, There was a rainbow drawn Proudly high in the blue sky' Real good imagination :)

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Well expressed soul, you are blessed(george the duck says quak, quak, to)

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Miroslava Odalovic 13 November 2010

Rain always purifying shower of sounds. Different languages blended in the same rhythm. Keep raining beautiful soul :)

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 10 November 2010

the rain speaks to us in mysterious words which we can interpret in our own way

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Kevin Carney 01 September 2010

A beautiful thoughtful write. Gives a new definition to rain. I actually read it twice and just had to stop and think about all the nuances you wrote. A lovely writ. Thank you for sharing this :)

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