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'loom off silver lake' Active verbs. And you need stanzas in this poem. It has great imagery as well.

Come very close Ĺet me taste your soul. Want to be hold Touch me by your soul. Come very close Let me breath your soul. Want to be yours Breath me by your soul. Come very close Let me breath for you You breath for me And be a everlasting soul. Sliver moon Silver Lake Rushing wind snow shaded mountains Nature descriptions, so beautifully presented.. ending up with „God is with us tonight“…thank you very much for sharing this poem.. tony

Sounds like a lullaby, did you write it for one of your children? a poet friend RH Peat