Sunday, April 12, 2009

Listen Sofia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come
Sofia.
Come listen to me.
Come, snuggle up close on Grandma’s knee.
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Janet Budd
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Colin J... 21 April 2009

I'm curled up in my chair, waiting for the story... Lovely... Colin J...

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Rory Hudson 16 April 2009

Charming and evocative. Very effective use of rhyme.

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Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 14 April 2009

Beautifully written Janet :)

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Janice Windle 13 April 2009

I do like your conversational tone here. You paint a warm picture with these words.

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Janet Budd

Janet Budd

Oldham, UK
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