You have asked me to read and appreciate your poems, they are good but I wish you would pay alittle more attention to grammatical errors.For eg. In the above poem if you had written
Listen to my questions,
It would make for better reading.
hope you take my remarks in the correct spirit
Regards
Arti Chopra
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You have asked me to read and appreciate your poems, they are good but I wish you would pay alittle more attention to grammatical errors.For eg. In the above poem if you had written Listen to my questions, It would make for better reading. hope you take my remarks in the correct spirit Regards Arti Chopra