Listen Me Comments

U made me too happy...I m proud to be your father

Please listen when I am breathing I hope you can hear the words Crowling out of the silence. Tell me, can you hear me the tones of silence forming into powerful words. a fine poem. tony

Drenched deep in the true essence of silent waiting heart to be recognised and understood every word his soul speaks without noise. I can feel the pain of being away. Beautiful words. Admirations

Very nice expression.

" Please listen when i am breathing I hope you can hear the words Crowling out of the silence. In my fumbled breaths..." marvellous expression so aptly articulated... Thanks.

Awesome 👏

Tq so much 😊😊...its my 1st experience I got good comment..tq once again

What an idea and its beautiful poetic expression. Words happening so effortlessly to construct images that reveal the philosophy of one's life. Thank you so much dear friend.