I want you to listen
when I talk
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Everyone should find this balance of talking and listening. Even if it means closing their mouths to let other people get their point across. Never be hushed mariana!
wow...thats is great and everybody should listen. u said it! ! !
It is so important to learn to listen, so much in this world to learn, the only way to do it to listen to the experienced ones. Listening to a loved one about issues of the heart and understanding always play a part. Thankyou for this poem Maiana, I too sometimes need to check myself and pay close attention and listen. I'm glad you wrote this, I for one benefited by it.---Melvina---
Mariana, your poems are simple and direct. Simplicity is the hallmark of a good poet. Your feelings are pure. Keep writing! Marc
guide ur frustration to poetry mariana.u will feel better. all the best roger
I'm hearing IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ditto to what Brian said
That's the nice thing about poetry... you can 'talk' all you want and nobody can interrupt. Good write, Mariana! Brian
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful creation nicely crafted from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched...