Tuesday, December 22, 2015

Lisa Knows Where The Poppies Hide Comments

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Lisa knows where the poppies hide
the men in white pick them up at night
Lisa knows but she won't tell Beth
cause she'd find it hard to hold her breath
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Max Aljoszyn
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Lily Dartford 23 December 2015

A pretty poem on the surface but I like the dark background you can get from it, nicely put.

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Maxwell Elovitsky 24 December 2015

Thank you, Lily!

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