Liquid Paradise Comments

I absorbed the fluid of hope And I let myself floating In my liquid paradise! a great poem indeed, images, comparisons. fine. tony

Good piece of poetry. Well done Luana

Incredibly imaginative!

A splendid way to write your heart this is not average poetry OMG Outstanding I bow

Very, very, Imaginative, Creative, You will go far, I think you have, That poetic Star.

I absorbed the fluid of hope And I let myself floating In my liquid paradise! lovely write