Liquid Love Comments

Loved the metaphor here! an intriquing peom. Loved It; D

fast moving screens, fading screens, still images, multiple pauses then I stopped and saw “I” outside my body, //////// i couldn't stand the temptation for being misundertood on score of misinterpreting the words in poem and still try to catch it on..Sudddenly I find my self out side the body as final call from HIm dading all the memroies.... very deep and emorional wordings.... i loved its essence....10 read mine innocence regained... iam disgrace......pulled from deep sleep..go back

‘…saw “I” outside my body, high on liquid love.’ Blown-up finish! Ten++++ niv Find me in my poems niv

wonderful write, as dew on glass blade by dulcet dawn, amazing, l10++, thanks for sharing

seeing the 'i' outside the body is very special...and that would end all the problems in the world...great...10

Nice poem sweet lines

fantastic verses...good flow to read.....10

A well written poem-again your usage of metaphors is fantastic. another 10

you see the 'I's on more than one the 'I' your meant to see, the'I' in me...iip

This is a special piece you have penned.

To see 'I' outside one's own body you need a special eye for sure...that of a philosopher or more, of a sage very 'enterprising' poem Emu, i would say...thanks...another 10.

lovely words you write

a sweet and hear touching poem with rich idea..well done..liked your poem..well done 10/10