Lips Pair Off Comments

Yes, silence is golden - and safe. Kisses are not so safe but much more positive! x Jan

A nice poem where the lips were seen from an intensive view.10 for it.

We are living in a illusive world where Lips playing a great role. Fine poem onelia! 10+

A pair of lips from the love comb sip, Bitter words in deep gloom dip.

lips...they pair off...kiss...and make love. they pair off...spit words...at times mar love. so i can not hail lips. but i do hail the wisdom kiss that surges out pairing off the lines here...

Lips stretch out under a strawberry moon, kisses unfold like deep sea creatures, and a little finger points the way....

fantastic...thanks for sharing

This poem reads like a recipe - a list of ingredients, each worth enjoying on its own, but when stirred together, creating something greater than the sum of its parts. There is mystery and magic and much tenderness in your poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Yes yes.. what do they put in your water at work... the fullness of bulging aira yet again! ! TENaciously extreme xx

Oh I love 'the secret code' of your poems and the thrill of deciphering their 'kiss.' Lips pairing off under the finger of God and being told to go forth and multiply! Hypnotically good! I must go now and...pair off! love Dee Dee

Fascinating imagery...I just love a kiss being a scarlet code to be deciphered and lips paring off to make love. Extraordinary imagery that captures the ordinary in such a beautifully startling way...as if a Magrite and a De Chirico were having a chat in an art gallery after dark when all the humans had left and it was just the paintings talking. As if all the surreal images just climbed out of their respective paintings and stretched their legs and found a bar still open called ONELIA'S and they just dropped in for one for the road and never left and ended up becoming your poem or dreampt forever of deciphering that scarlet code as the road of their dreams drifted like smoke above their shoulder. love Donall Donall

Another lovely image, One. Perhaps we need deafness and blindness in order to understand and see! Fx

yet superb tribute to love when nailed yet poignant by its feeks of sorrow heart when bleeds by the shadow love still accorded by the history yet not alone..................yet unequalled when wriought by imagery of love saddened........well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

Such lovely images and expression of emotion...Coach

From lips come words that may wound but actions speak louder than words...a kiss can heal and seal when love takes a hold...love this one O... j xx

Thesis/antithesis of lips paired to synthesise an act of love... You move with serenity from words to kisses and capture a Godlike avatar. Intriguing! Rgds, Ivan

Lips: variations on the theme. Strokes in chiaroscuro: -y

I love how you sum up all those feelings and issues! Sometimes lips speak and hurt but they also have the ability to heal, as is shown here. Lovely penning One! HG: -) xx

pair off and make love..... a magic spell! A 10.