Monday, April 14, 2014

Lips Comments

Rating: 4.7

A marshy dew of softness
Tender river of loving cave
A wetly cotton clay of sweet fragile
Two edges wave in deep shallows
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Henry Garcia 08 May 2015

a poem with full of passion Great sharing

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Sonali Ganguly 16 May 2014

nicely encrypted......

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Jonas Goncalves 08 May 2014

Each word of this poem made me imagine all the descriptions on it. And I can say it's visually wonderful :)

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Helena Zen 06 May 2014

.....Wonderful literature

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Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

Very Impressive poem. Thumbs UP

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Jose Santos 01 May 2014

Artful, creative, imaginative, ingenious, innovative, inventive HIGHLY WONDERFUL

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Bernadette Fernandez 29 April 2014

How intelligent of this poet who used very refining words to make it very subtle and smooth Two thumbs up

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Yash Shinde 29 April 2014

a beautifully penned, romantic write, ...............with vivid imagery and colours! ..................kudos

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Henry Garcia 28 April 2014

a subtle romantic poem. Brilliant lines and words

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Princess Sison 27 April 2014

A vivid and descriptive imagery. Brilliant poem

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Jessica Hernandezdamian 25 April 2014

Its very lovely to put together with love. Its beautiful. great poetry indeed. love it! (:

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Matthias Pantaleon 24 April 2014

Lips do not lie the tongue does. Beautifully penned

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Vishal Sharma 22 April 2014

very lovely poetry to share....! ! ! Nice write indeed

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Shania K. Younce 20 April 2014

This is a lovely poem all together with lovely expressions. Bien!

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 April 2014

Hot lips and thirsty lips Cold lips and calm lips Draw close and far dreams Draws picture of love and hate

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