Liplock Carbomb And Puzzle Piece Noses Comments

Kinda like this piece. I have no idea what the title refers to.

I had to read this several times before I could comment. It is a very interesting poem and flows well but the combination of words don't give off a good vibe for me. A bit like chalk scratching on a black board. I don't mean that in a derogatory way toward your poem, I am just explaining how it made me feel. I did find it a very interestsing read and it has left me still wondering about it. Gyp's