Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Lions Birds And Fireflies Comments

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I heard a melody in the rose
I was a dreaming child
asleep beneath the apple tree
wandering amid wonders
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 29 September 2016

What a lovely write from your mighty pen. You have a wonderful way of saying things.10 for sure

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Barry Middleton 29 September 2016

Thanks again Nosheen. I think I do best with reacting to events that were real. That was me as a kid. Still is for that matter. :)

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Kim Barney 28 September 2016

At the base of the tree it looks like there is a small turtle with an extended neck. Is that a turtle or something else?

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Barry Middleton 28 September 2016

I have no idea what that is. But I think it's a weed not a turtle.

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Kim Barney 28 September 2016

Great picture and poem, Barry! If nobody ever dreamed, nothing would ever get invented, and life would be boring. Love the first line. How many others could hear a melody in a rose?

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Barry Middleton 28 September 2016

Thank you for reading and commenting. I think all poets hear that melody.

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