Lion Around Comments

(cont.) Did Dillip and Rajnish NOT NOTICE what I call typos? ? Or did they want to be 'nice' to you, poetess, and not mention THEM? ? Hmm? : ))) I'll give 5 stars nonetheless. There! I did it. ;)

'Want to lie around with my lion' Since I see no question mark, I'm guessing you meant to have 'I' at the start of this line.

'he is the one that keeps my flying' Wait a moment. Did you, Aqua Flower, leave some word(s) off the end of your last line? Pehaps 'fish' or 'flags? , OR did you mean to type 'me', not 'my'/? : ))))

(cont.) 'The liger is distinct from the similar hybrid called the tigon, and is the largest of all known extant felines. They enjoy swimming, which is a characteristic of tigers, and are very sociable like lions.'

'The liger is a hybrid offspring of a male lion (Panthera leo) and a tigress, or female tiger (Panthera tigris) .The liger has parents in the same genus but of different species.' (cont.)

Interspecies mating? Yes. You may give birth to a liger. 'Apparently macaque monkeys in Japan routinely engage in sexual behavior with deer.'

'to say goodbye of the love he wants to bestow' Perhaps you wanted to use 'to', not 'of'? ? ? What do I KNOW? ? ? bri : )

I LOVE the title as it plays with the first lion, lyin', ...NO! ....line of your poem A.Q., my good friend. : )

A fantastic write... great imagery! Fascinating expression... loved reading this beautiful poem..10

It's the magic potion of love that brings lovers closer. The poem is all about love and longing explained with a fascinating imagery. Thanks for sharing.