Monday, January 30, 2006

Lion 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pain in her limb,
She is dizzy but she hides it well.
She hides this pain in her shell,
Like everything else, it seems to work well.
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Kathrine Philip
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Leo Lopes 06 September 2006

This sounds like a deep poem already imagine when you finish it....... exellent ...The lion didn't push her over the edge did he...?

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Peter A. Crowther 09 February 2006

This is the longest poem I ever read on PoemHunter, and still it isn't finished! I think it deserves the 10 I have given it.

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Amberlee Spurling 08 February 2006

Katrin I see myself in you. It was very powerful. I..listen kat follow your heart... im going to write the finishing touchings on this story

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Kathrine Philip

Kathrine Philip

Idaho, Twin Falls
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