Wednesday, August 9, 2017

Lingering Sigh Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw her hazy face
Beyond the thicket of pine
I heard her lingering sighs
Filled with frozen sadness
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shakil ahmed
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Susan Lacovara 25 August 2017

I love the line...Pulling me away from myself It tells of the surrender to love. Excellent poem!

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Nosheen Irfan 14 August 2017

A superb write. Love is not just pleasure, but also a lot of pain. A sense of gloom, of longing prevails. Very captivating write with a wonderful use of vocabulary. A big 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2017

Wow! It is a marvellous poem on love having stunning expression. Let me quote some lines... Flared in the arms of sky Scaring away the hooting birds Flaunting around her stringent body Thumping of her throbbing heart Floated in the winter breeze... Many thanks dear Shakil keep on writing.

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shakil ahmed

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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