I saw her hazy face
Beyond the thicket of pine
I heard her lingering sighs
Filled with frozen sadness
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A superb write. Love is not just pleasure, but also a lot of pain. A sense of gloom, of longing prevails. Very captivating write with a wonderful use of vocabulary. A big 10.
Wow! It is a marvellous poem on love having stunning expression. Let me quote some lines... Flared in the arms of sky Scaring away the hooting birds Flaunting around her stringent body Thumping of her throbbing heart Floated in the winter breeze... Many thanks dear Shakil keep on writing.
I love the line...Pulling me away from myself It tells of the surrender to love. Excellent poem!