I am hopelessly
And happily
Lingering
With one foot
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This is an amazing work...I like the effect your words create...speed, time, time moving faster and faster. You almost force the reader to hold a breath until the last word is reached...A 10.
I like the principles and sentiment expressed and yet, Raymond, the new gadget offer so much connectivity in so many ways, it may be worth taking the time and effort to get familiar with them.