Saturday, July 21, 2018

Lingering Beauty Of A Tiny Dew Drop Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tiny dew drop
Lives as long as it holds on
To a hanging leaf,
To a blade of grass,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

Thanks a lot for your comment, dear poet EKL.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

@Susan Williams, You are very kind! I am greatly inspired by your generous rating of the poem and your appreciative comment. Am also glad to note that you had a look at the 'Poet's Notes' and appreciated that too. Few readers take notice of such details.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

@S.zaynab Kamoonpuri, I am glad to know that both you and your mom love and admire dew drops.I am greatly inspired by the high praise you showeed on my poem. Thank you so very much!

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

@Rose Marie Juan-austin, Thank you so much for reading my poem and so correctly interpreting my humble wok! I am greatly honored by your generous rating of the poem and for picking it up for your 'MyPoemList'. I have just read and commented on your beautiful poem 'Crescent Moon'.

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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2020

@Mahtab Bangalee, Thanks for quoting from the poem and appreciating the poem so much. Glad to have your inspiring comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2020

Alas! Alas! ! ! To behold the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 02 August 2018

Beautiful quote in the Poet's Note, but I find your poem equally beautiful in its image of that tiny drop of dew. Your image is lingering in my mind and that is a true test of a poem. 10++++++++++++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 July 2018

Aha wow wow this is truly one of your masterpieces! ! ! You wrote it so creatively reflectively with a great poetic mind of tassawur(Urdu) . The short lived nature of beauty. Both me and my mom love admiring dewdrops so I admired your great poem sir. Kudos. Pleez do add your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too, titled, mirage surprise.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2018

A profound piece of work with a meaningful message. No matter how brief our moment in this life if we make a significant thing, we will be long remembered. A great poem worthy of 10++++ and to my Poem List.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2018

Excellent overvaluation on life- A life so short lived, Yet how long lasting Remains the beautiful image It leaves behind! ////// yes it leaves behind beautiful images excellent always SIR

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Hazel Durham 22 July 2018

A dew drop hangs in a graceful and courageous way as it hangs on to a leaf creating a sparkle on a dull day! Beautiful write!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2018

Yes, 'courageous' is another right attribute of a tiny dew drop that I missed, but you've rightly mentioned. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem, @Hazel Durham.

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2018

A beautifully crafted write. ++10- - - - - - - - -

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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2018

Thank you, @Robert Murray Smith. I am much obliged.

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