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Your future is bright in writing copy for ads. Very attractive captions..splendid theme...Alluring words illustration. Near to natural feeling..Close encounter of the fourth kind. it is complete.. Congrats.A three dimension touch.

A good poem........ You always write in so different way..........

Beautiful, my dear, we need poetess like you et al to be the stealth watcher of XX and XY and many unspoken spiritual, or moral issues and other universal themes.This poem you dare share the vices and virtues [ metaphorically] of your observation and images of some of the beauties[the 'Lingerie' speaks truth about the beauty of females that only we could know best] of female [yin]... our males [yang] [we bless and give them praises too].

Well very inteeresting. My mother's nane was Ingeborg. They used to call her instant gratification

Both sad and hurtful truth.

really bold and an intelligent use of words. you are a powerhouse of talent and the stuff you write is so captivating.

Hon’ble Poet Sir [John], Thank you very much for 'cascade comments'. Indeed I’m amazed that a wee writer like me drew attention of very good Senior Poet like you. I bow before your painstaking endeavor. niv Copy forwarded to J. Knight. niv

Hi Niv - I have read lots of your poems - they are all lovely but this is my favorite because it is both sensual and senasitive. I have scored it TEN. V 1-3 L is very priviledged beacuse it not only protects your erogneous zones but also caresses them and experiences ones emotions. 'Inclosure and Browser of inclinations and enticemnet - it both contains and restrains - BEAUTIFUL. V 4&5 L also defines - captivates and shares ones veery contour - PERFECT. V 6-8 It also Shields - ones agony & ecstacy - Mutes and Sanitizes our sexuality and sensuality and Tracks our ethos & pathos - hate & love - trepidatioNs & temptations. AWESOME. V 9 However L - IG can never fully control Limbs - Bosoms - Butts - Pectorals etc in fact we sometimes use L - IG to enhance our assets! V 10&11 For the YIN - L is the senital and for the YANG - IG is the first to feel the stiring of the python! V 12 L - IG are very importnat in foreplay but their experience is vicariuos not experiential. V 13 In pure unsullied - unhurried coitious a point is raeche in which L- IG has played its role and is discarded for the pristine pleasure of EVEANDADAMNESS! V 14 be not decoived L - IG are not mocked but keep vigilance at thier point of discardment because they know when all the sighings have ended they (or their sisters / brothers fresh out of the knicker drawer) will once again become the SHIELD - SENTAL & SANITIZER - AMAZING. Love you in poetry - JOHN.

This is quite interesting, this is uncanny, uncommon, odd, unique in structure very different from commonly known poetry since Shakespeare, Alfred Tennyson or Elizabeth Browning.Improve it to make it more exciting.

Wonderful concept and finish in accord with. Write on quirky, unconventional subject. Thanks Ms. Nivedita for sharing.

Agree with Poet C. P. Sharma you’ve an uncanny flair of choosing odds singular poetic elements and sculpt it as visual words Ten+

bold and descriptive but yet within the moral frames good write -10 anjali (do read my latest MY HEART DOESN’T HAVE A CLUE)

Vibe diction you’ve well nibbed. Keep it up. Ten++ AB London

Your focus on man-woman relation and nearness is from a new perspective. Liking your direct and straightforward expressions not losing the aesthetic sense.

Unusual aesthetics. Beautifully written Enjoyed reading it

...this was a better poem good write...10s

Noetically any thing can be a poetic element from Alps to Zeppelin from Pin to Elephant. Lingerie IG is an exquisite [lavishly elegant and refined] element blended with sensuousness [not sexuality] and with a grand finish: ‘Womb to tomb // Virtual reality // Amniotic sac to // Cremation ash relic.’ Wow! to your poetic talent Ten++ Dr. V. PS I salute your sophisticate attitude to your critics. It’s the true Poetic spirit.

To Hon’ble Poet Ershad Mazumder I welcome your comment. Thanks. niv

I do not like poems. It turns an essay. Its like reporting. Your theme is excellant. But it failed to be a poetic.

LINGERIE- IG shouldn't be said in each stanz it kills the flow