Lingered Long Upon This Dream Comments

one more chance, one last try. Goodbye my dream, so long, goodnight, this life I have is soley mine. O Viola what ownership love or its absence entails

Wow! a masterpiece of writing, such powerful, poignant lines. Tango.

awesome! goodbye to a lying lover. amazing job!

Beautifully composed, even though this write is of sadness...your ability to use such emotion within every heart felt line, is of the highest qualities only that a poet as yourself are blessed to hold. Excellent! ! ! ! 10/10 from me :) Best wishes Jon.

Oh my goodness! I almost started crying. This is so sad! Maybe I am just weird. But it is a good poem!

Gentle feeling it is enriched «by psychological nuances …» sincere...

...maby if you wish it very strong, this dream may reappear again for you...

A bitter-sweet poem that has been expressed most poeticallly. Thanks.

To dream is to cherish life even in slumber, it is the most perfect illusions that is almost real! Loved this, high marks.

lovely.. i enjoyed readin this.