Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Linger Longer Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trusting takes time
Play perfect pleasure
Linger longer lover
Strike sensual strings
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Alison Smith
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Tired of Being Exploited 26 March 2007

Excellent love poem. Avoiding repetition always works with love.

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Tranquil Ocean 15 March 2007

Linger longer Alison and make beautiful poems. Love...TO

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Séamus Fox 14 March 2007

Lovely lines linked, Alison as always!

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A lyrical foundation to this fine, compendious read.Solid Work, young lady! .....and the beat goes on... F J R

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Ivan Donn Carswell 14 March 2007

Cool tune, like the beat! Rgds, Ivan

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Marci Made 14 March 2007

It's about the trusting and then for some fortunate ones, all of the above expressed so wonderously...... really nice Alison...........mm :)

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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