You are now too old
to indulge in arrogance
and yet you are too young
...
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Being past the 'midpoint, ' I can read this without squirming, thinking it is aimed at me. It is well-done, thoughtful, and whoever it is aimed at will certainly not know it. That's the part about being at that arrogant part of life. Ah, the things we learn! Raynette
Michael...I have to squirm a little, thinking that I could fit this picture. It's nice to see a clearly written poem without cliches and without an emphasis on rhyme, which doesn't usually add much. The lack of periods, etc., draws attention. This one gets a ten. Good work.
Like all 'chillers', David, it comes hot from self-knowledge! But yes, more than one specific...
Spoken with wisdom and talent, Michael. Is this directed at anybody in particular, or just a general musing?
i'm glad i read this today, Michael. i really needed to hear something like this. Jake