Lines Of Success Comments
Essence holds its dream entire,
Strengthens hope true into fire
To fit in it to be higher
To the most breezed to aspire.
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this is agreat poem that expresses the hopes and dreams of many. as previously said you have a gre4at rhyming scheme. great poem
I like it a lot..I am sharing with my friends on facebook.
Beautiful poem.....really touches one's heart! keep writing
Beautiful poem. Your poem chronicles the upward journey of hopes and dreams, and the elusive path of success. Great ryhme scheme.
i loved the rhyme schem it was wonderful you are indeed vary talented
WOW! It was a treat to read your poem. I really enjoyed it! 10 definately!
musical and mystical..........treat for eyes and heart........good poem
increadibly stunnig! ! ! ! wonderful rhymes! ! ! keep writing and tell me once you write anything! ! ! 10++++++++++++
the poem is wonderful! The last vowels in every line is ' i ' and only few poems that i have read kept a single pattern to the entire poem! Very well penned!
Hello Obinna K. Eruchie, Success is not always achieved so easily as you have nicely penned your poem! But... keeping motivation, ambition, along with dedication, responsibility and work you can make it happen! Thanks for sharing.
beyond the materiatlistic meaning of success, into the realms of pure heartfelt success...well drawn lines...well done
Dream triggers the ambition and keeping the ambition in view if we strive hard in a focussed way, success will never elude us.It is said ' Nothing succeeds like success.'The amount of happiness we derive from success is immeasurable. Brilliant thought penned beautifully.
Oh what rhymes bro...lines jam packed with meaning..expressed it a rhythmic form you could almost dance to.....nicely expressed bro....One of your finest - for rhyme...............great work 10++
beautiful and meaningful poem.lasit para is wonderful. 'Heart content in sublime, Remains diamond-worth in prime. Victory does reign in clime, Hailing joy bell-like to chime' voted10 surya
Mmmmmmm.......as usual with your poems it gives food for thought
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Essence of dream holds message of success. This poem is very brilliantly penned. This is an excellent sharing done here...10