Saturday, September 3, 2005

! Lines From The Pub Comments

Rating: 2.6

You,
slim but well-nourished,
not unhandsome, dark, perhaps of Middle East descent,
who's just come in the door at the speed of
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Michael Shepherd
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Fay Slimm 25 August 2008

You with your story have set us all wondering Michael. And what a story you tell. What ever became of those flowers I would like to know. Bestest wishes Fay.

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Theorem Thetruthserum 03 September 2005

Very good...nice work.

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t. h. ashbury 03 September 2005

immaculate, immaculate, immaculate.

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'Mike, ' I just love the simplicity of this poem....I hear MUSIC....could be from the jukebox in the corner...or it could just be yours'. Fabulous poem.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 September 2005

Michael, I like the images you have constructed. Nice work. Congratulations.

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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