Friday, October 17, 2008

Lines From A Sad Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

A mere smile is giving me feeling of guilt,
Feeling of sadness has engulfed my heart into the dark well it has built.
Knowing someone wont be around does shatter,
makes feel of the night even as the sunlight scatter,
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Dhanesh (trying to be) poet
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Ted M 04 July 2009

When your loved ones, your elders are no more, you miss their caring attitude, their love towards you, their blessings and their good wishes and you may cry silently in Joy for knowing them. Well written.

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Hunter Dasten 25 November 2008

I liked this poem very much. How true it is, no matter how strong one is, we need the ones who care for us far more than we truly realize.

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 23 November 2008

real nice you dont have to try u r a poet...

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Reshma Ramesh 09 November 2008

ohhhhh cold feet.....so sad.....life goes on nice one there

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Amit Gokhale 21 October 2008

Hi dhanu its a nice tribute for some one, i know who is he. Don't worry, the people who truely love you and you love them, will never be short of blessing even if they are in there final journey.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 October 2008

forget the hands...feel the hearts...that is the true way how blessings come...good meaningful write, Dhanesh 10

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Anjali Sinha 17 October 2008

so sad dhanu really u made me cry ++++++10 regards anju

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