Lines
Drawn in the sand
Surround us 
Where we stand
                
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Sounds like you're doing just that. A powerfully presented response to the current political system, perhaps? Succinct and ironic, it's a pleasure to read a poet who doesn't over-egg the pudding. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

 
                     
                
awesome :) nice rythm