Friday, February 28, 2020

Line Of Scrimmage Comments

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Line of Scrimmage
Love flows in me like a river my love
Then I see all around Your image
Your fragrance intoxicate my dove
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2020

Love flows like a river. You have realized the truth and this is very nicely and interestingly penned with expression of amazing beauty.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2020

Let me taste the flow of passion/Let me see just my courage to face/You carry along a wonderful fashion/I follow you from place to place....lovely poetic expression dear poet! Thanks for sharing....10+++++++++++

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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