Thursday, June 20, 2019

Line In The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had my line drawn in the sand
It took up most of the beach
Has finally been crossed
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Jennifer Birchall
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Sekharan Pookkat 20 June 2019

Waves wipes the sand Leaving a gap between The line of life crossed And the line of life to be crossed

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

the life has straight line; but sometimes tide comes to the coastal area to untidy the pacified aroud!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 June 2019

Wonderful conceptualization! I see a beautiful background of the great sea at the back of this poem....you have drawn your line on the beach...then you think of tide...crystal waters...! The title, 'Line in the sand' is biffing! A fascinating little poem....10

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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