Monday, January 2, 2012

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Don't fly
Butterfly!
stay a little and enjoy
tiny buds
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Shahzia Batool
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Bri Edwards 08 December 2016

maybe you would be surprised how strongly some butterflies seem to fly on a windy day, and not just near the ground! ok, they may 'go with the flow' at times, but sometimes that is 'smart'! i've sometimes noticed TWO butterflies fluttering alongside one another, within inches of one another, and on a windy day! beautiful AND powerful? would you give a daughter the same advice? nice poem. i mean nicely done! bri :) to MyPoemList

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Ramesh Rai 03 May 2015

A beautiful composition and very expressive too.

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Guy Lip-more 16 May 2013

A beautiful little poem.

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Walterrean Salley 13 September 2012

Gotta love the butterfly. Everything has purpose- even the fragile little butterfly, which brings so much beauty and inspiration to life. A beautiful and insightful nature poem.

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