The moment I peep,
In the tank of thoughts.
The memories I found,
Of the daunting stock.
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Aditya, This is a profound write.............our dominating thoughts are negative. We dwell on sorrow and ignore the positive aspects in our lives. It could be because we fear we are leting our guard down, if we relax and think life is good as it is.........10.
Aditya...your poems are very readable...but they are so pessimistic that I felt pain within...while going thru them.....10.....although I'll love to read an optimistically written verse by my young friend......Brishti