Friday, October 30, 2009

Limitless Sorrows Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moment I peep,
In the tank of thoughts.
The memories I found,
Of the daunting stock.
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Aditya Pathak 'particle'
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Brishti Mazumdar 08 November 2009

Aditya...your poems are very readable...but they are so pessimistic that I felt pain within...while going thru them.....10.....although I'll love to read an optimistically written verse by my young friend......Brishti

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Parth Arora 02 November 2009

i didnt know our cc was so pessimistic...

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Milica Franchi De Luri 30 October 2009

Aditya, This is a profound write.............our dominating thoughts are negative. We dwell on sorrow and ignore the positive aspects in our lives. It could be because we fear we are leting our guard down, if we relax and think life is good as it is.........10.

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