Introduction: Limit itself has a limit of its own…
A walk, mile after mile
In quest for my lost soul,
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Lust has itself in an unending pleasure for the infinity.Established well.
Beautiful poem! Very well written. 'A lesson of value I earned from my faults ' My favorite line ^_^
MISTAKES ARE COMMITTED LESSONS ARE LEANED PRAYER IS USED THESE WORDS THAT REMAINED IN MY THOUGHTS FROM THIS POEM IS VERY SIGNIFICANT
this poem is very inspiring keeps the reader thinking and at first i was skeptical about the title but at the end u turned it around
wow... that really good! i really like it its so wonderful! keep it up :)
I really liked it! I do feel this way at times, it explains a lot. Keep it up!
It's an absolute joy to read your work! Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and all of your beautiful writings...Each one has such a strong message and you have a real gift with powerful wording and emotion. Keep it up! ! Can't wait to read more!
Reading your poems either teaches me a lesson or brings out the emotion i have. I love your poems..I really do...-Bookmarks-
I love how you approached the same meaning (search for soul and repeated mistakes along the way) in two different ways in the 1st and 2nd stanza and ended with an expression how a song plays repeating in our mind! ! just like it repeated in both stanzas! And It's such an amazing thing you do with your poems...somehow, someway you always manage to bring Almighty to your poetry and thanking him...Whatever the content may be, you bring Him as the one to help you write each piece. Such a great quality! the 3rd stanza blew me away...brilliantly done!
Amazing, , wonderful as usual, u're totally right even the limit has its limits, very beautiful poem my friend :)
this poem is wonderful. you speak of truth, iys hard me to pick a favorite line.4 each line took my breath away. i really enjoyed it. i just love your work. way to go :)
I love it. I can totally relate to it My favorite lines 'The regrets for mistakes I’ve made It took me off the edge, way too far away; ' <3
Beautifully written and well received!