Friday, August 26, 2011

Limitless Lust Comments

Rating: 4.8

Introduction: Limit itself has a limit of its own…

A walk, mile after mile
In quest for my lost soul,
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Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar
COMMENTS
Rita Kele 23 October 2011

Beautifully written and well received!

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 October 2011

Lust has itself in an unending pleasure for the infinity.Established well.

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Jessie Hopkins 27 September 2011

This poem was wonderful. I can't wait to read more.

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Crimson Love 24 September 2011

Beautiful poem! Very well written. 'A lesson of value I earned from my faults ' My favorite line ^_^

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 24 September 2011

MISTAKES ARE COMMITTED LESSONS ARE LEANED PRAYER IS USED THESE WORDS THAT REMAINED IN MY THOUGHTS FROM THIS POEM IS VERY SIGNIFICANT

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Lovable Wisdom 06 September 2011

this poem is very inspiring keeps the reader thinking and at first i was skeptical about the title but at the end u turned it around

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Cecelia Olivaira 05 September 2011

wow... that really good! i really like it its so wonderful! keep it up :)

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Victoria Horn 30 August 2011

I really liked it! I do feel this way at times, it explains a lot. Keep it up!

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Mandi June 29 August 2011

It's an absolute joy to read your work! Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and all of your beautiful writings...Each one has such a strong message and you have a real gift with powerful wording and emotion. Keep it up! ! Can't wait to read more!

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Anthony Zeigler 29 August 2011

Reading your poems either teaches me a lesson or brings out the emotion i have. I love your poems..I really do...-Bookmarks-

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Chaths Odion 28 August 2011

I love how you approached the same meaning (search for soul and repeated mistakes along the way) in two different ways in the 1st and 2nd stanza and ended with an expression how a song plays repeating in our mind! ! just like it repeated in both stanzas! And It's such an amazing thing you do with your poems...somehow, someway you always manage to bring Almighty to your poetry and thanking him...Whatever the content may be, you bring Him as the one to help you write each piece. Such a great quality! the 3rd stanza blew me away...brilliantly done!

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Abdallah Gamal 28 August 2011

Amazing, , wonderful as usual, u're totally right even the limit has its limits, very beautiful poem my friend :)

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this poem is wonderful. you speak of truth, iys hard me to pick a favorite line.4 each line took my breath away. i really enjoyed it. i just love your work. way to go :)

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Broken Heart 26 August 2011

I love it. I can totally relate to it My favorite lines 'The regrets for mistakes I’ve made It took me off the edge, way too far away; ' <3

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