Friday, October 30, 2015

Limited Time Comments

Rating: 4.8

What else can you do,
When there's no time to prove.

Limited is the time provided,
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2016

Profound writing...The world we live in is filled with many surprises....A thoughtful poem.10+++

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Smart work always is better than hard work.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 February 2016

Yes! We have to use time wisely enough today. Nice piece of work.

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Roseann Shawiak 17 January 2016

Very true dear Abdulrazak, and even then the present doesn't always give us any assurance that we will not be taken by death itself. Nothing in our lives is for sure is it? Thank you for this wonderful poem. RoseAnn

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Hans Vr 10 January 2016

Thought provoking poem. There really hangs so much mystery around time. Often not enough, sometimes too much. One moment ago, gone forever, One moment from now, anything may happen. While writing this, moments that were to happen have happened and are gone forever, making up part of the un-erasable past. Moments come so fast and yet the concept of eternity seems so vast Good poem, Razak.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 November 2015

We can only have present in our hand to work for leaving a mark.Nice.

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Dutendra Chamling 23 November 2015

Really beautiful poem........!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 09 November 2015

Your poem rings the truth Eckhart Tolle tries to elaborate in his famous works. There is only the NOW.

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Indira Renganathan 09 November 2015

Very true...make hay when the wind blows...great work 10++++

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Loke Kok Yee 01 November 2015

Yea! Yea! live for the present thanks-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2015

The past is a burden, Future is uncertain. The present is only the assurance.......really it is.We must look forward to the present. A beautiful poem I like very much. Thanks for sharing.......10

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2015

There are no truer words. Thanks, Abdulrazak

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Past is burden, present is certain, future is uncertain, well, superb sir.

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Sanjukta Nag 30 October 2015

The truth of life is wisely expressed. A very inspirational poem. The past is a burden, Future is uncertain. Amazing lines.

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